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The fault is of the crown... by Rumay-Chian The fault is of the crown... by Rumay-Chian
Pues despues de ver el capitulo de hora de aventura "Finn the human" y "Jake the dog" se me ocurrio hacer esto.

¿Como sería la vida de Finn si llegara a pasar por lo mismo que Simon Petrikov? ¿Perderia a FP al igual que el perdio a Betty? ¿Jake estaria con el y lo olvidaria al igual que lo hizo el rey helado con Marceline?

hace rato estaba motivada a hacer un "comic" de este "universo paralelo" pero estoy bastante ocupada como para hacerlo :iconotlplz:

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Finn / Flame Princess / Jake - Adventure Time © Pendleton Ward
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Critique by love-war Dec 6, 2013, 8:25:46 AM
This is one of my first critiques so please do bear with me.
For the vision, the artwork represents the title itself-meaning that it is related to the title (in this case, Ice Prince Finn is blaming the crown, which caused him to lose Flame Princess and Jake). About the originality, this is somewhat not new to scene (well, lets say that this has been since last year). Lots of artists have been making artworks that mean that Finn has broken relationships with his loved ones. Also since you based this from a real episode in Adventure Time, I will deduct 1 star. As for the technique, I really loved how you blended in everything and made a really nice mix, even though it has both strong and light colors (in shorter words, the mix of hues, shades and colors is pleasing to the eye). The transparency is perfect and you made Ice Prince Finn stand out in the picture. Lastly, the impact. This displays strong emotions, basically tragedy. It is a great deviation but does not really blow my mind. So I will deduct 0.5 stars.
So...I guess thats it. ^-^
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:iconnallcalmer:
NallCalmer Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
No, the fault is but your own... and so as the path you chose when you placed that cursed crown upon your head. 
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
su princesa TT^TT
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:iconjoshumertens:
JoshuMertens Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
they exist in different timelines .. nice fanart though .
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:iconberryglob:
BerryGlob Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student General Artist
It's just beautiful is not ice prince?
Es simplemente hermoso es el príncipe helado no ?
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:iconrumay-chian:
Rumay-Chian Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes
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:iconlivj031:
livj031 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ikr Rainbow Cute Cry Plz 
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:iconyantixxchuyita:
YantixxChuyita Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013
EEPICO!!
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:iconadventure-time-sis:
Adventure-Time-Sis Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013
Poor Finn :(
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:iconzombiejamm:
Zombiejamm Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
THE VOICES TELL ME TO SAVE MYSELF!!! But I'll find her again, no matter the cost!
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:iconiloveninjago2233:
Iloveninjago2233 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
Hey this is really good I love it!!
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:icongoogre:
googre Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
ppssssssssssssh que fuerte
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:iconfioleephinbella:
fioleephinbella Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
TToTT que trizte
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:iconmeikojoker:
meikojoker Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
si eso pasara seria muy triste
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:iconund3r-th3-m00n:
UND3R-TH3-M00N Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What happened to his arm!?
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:iconghostwindx:
GhostWindX Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
That Finn its from another Realty timeline
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:iconjohnpeacekeeper:
JohnPeacekeeper Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
History repeats...
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:iconkeldeo-corn:
Keldeo-corn Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely artwork, and nice idea too :>
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:iconabnolasco:
abnolasco Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
I Cried Because Of This Picture!!
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:iconrainkrad:
RainKrad Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
Aqui Finn alterno encuentra una forma de mirar en el otro universo?
O con un espejo magico?

O talvez solo es como la portada de tu fan-fic?
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Maxamillion2009 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Is it just me, or does that crown look very similar to the Flame Kings' crown?
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:iconheluethehedghehog:
heluethehedghehog Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hay hubiera llorado si hubieran puesto algo asi en los episodios de finn el humano y jake el perro ;A;
es mas, apenas aqui en Mexico pasaron el especial de navidad de hora de aventura (ayer de hecho), y solo salio Simon, y no podia dejar de sufrir y pensar que el muere en el mundo sin Lich :iconamericawhyplz:
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:icono0nataxx0o:
o0NataxX0o Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
qwq
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:iconrivera92:
Rivera92 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
pues ami se me ocurrio de que la vida de Finn (como sufrio simon) seria asi:

1. -vagaria por el mundo (con la corona a sus manos) tratando de ayudar a quien sea, tal vez con la estatua congelada de Jake con el.
2. -Se me ocurre de que se encontrara con la dulce princesa de niña (como Simon con Marceline) y la ayudara siempre.
3.- como no tenia ningun amor, su obsecion seria la de destruir a todo ser malvado, pero la corona lo enloquece haciendole ver que todos son malos (y no reconoce diferencia)
4. -pero tambien conoce a la princesa Flame en una de sus aventuras.
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:iconmoukatachinne:
Moukatachinne Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
hoho bueno cada una de las cosas que dices podrian ser ciertas

muy buen dibujo
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evilfrenchgirl Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
DUDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE acabas de romperme el corazón en mil pedasos que tuve que esperar 15 minutos para guardar esto en favoritos y dejar de llorar, lo de Simon&Betty, es sumamente triste, y luego veo esto, y no me puedo imaginar que pase lo mismo, deberías trabajar con Moffat el tipo que hace Dr.Who y Sherlock, eso que hiciste con la imagen sería un episodio genial que haría que todo el fandom se deprimiera, pero lo repetirían 5 veces al día, de la buena idea que es.
Felicidades
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:iconrumay-chian:
Rumay-Chian Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eh... :) gracias, ojala fuera asi
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:iconmarceline124:
Marceline124 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Llorare Toda La Tarde Hasta Que Finn Recuerde A La Fogosita, Si Finn Es Feliz Yo Tambien.......Creo :worry:
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:iconnel-katz:
Nel-katz Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Wowhow! *O*

THIS IS AMAZING!
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:iconrumay-chian:
Rumay-Chian Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ty
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:iconnel-katz:
Nel-katz Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
;)
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sakataozuraGX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hay no los feels son tantos que no los soporto dsjkfdhdshjfdjkfds
Si pasara eso en serio lloraría dios xDDD
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SomaRuiz Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional General Artist
Ya que te desocupes lo puedes hacer. owo
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:icondeadlockat:
DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Men this episodes gives you shocker in every episode.
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:iconrotmetx:
RotmetX Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
seria muy interesante... si hicieras la historia claro esta :) y fin tiene una mano robot! por que?
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:iconmarceline124:
Marceline124 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Como Se Nota Que No Sabes Nada De AT :X
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:iconrotmetx:
RotmetX Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Pero si fueras una verdadera fanática me dirías (así me podría interesar mas en la serie) y no me reprocharías "que no se nada de AT".

"No se puede tener un lago de conocimiento con un centímetro de profundidad"

Igual no hay cuidado igual ya vi porque tiene una mano robot...
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Marceline124 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Y ¿Quien Te Dijo Que Te Reprocho? Y Si TU Fueras Un Fan Sabrias Que Ese Es El¨Finn Alterno¨ De Otra Dimencion y Ya No Habria Problema, Aparte Como Que Si ¨Fuera¨ Una Verdadera Fanatica? Para Tu Informacion Si, Me Gusta Adventure Time ¿Y QUE? No Es Tu Problema Si Soy O No Una Fanatica? Con Todo Respeto Me Disculpo Si Eso Es Lo Que Quieres? Y Si No, Me Vale.
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evilfrenchgirl Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
no tengo por que meterme a esto ._., de verdad que no, pero, vamos no tienes que ponerte así; es de la quinta temporada, hay algunas personas que vemos los caps en cuanto alguien los sube, pero otras personas no, y eso no significa no ser un fan.
Perdona si esto suena feo o algo intenté escribirlo de la forma menos escandalosa, algo así como para leerlo despacio y bonito , las fandom wars son malas, en vez de discutir deberíamos estar shippeando algo y leyendo fanfics :) tranquilas
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Marceline124 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Es Mujer (.-.) esto es incomodo..., al cabo que se acabo el problema, tienes razon pero no me gusta que me insulten ¬¬ y yo como buena niña que soy me defiendo de manera verbal y pasificamente......
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evilfrenchgirl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Nop ._. acabo de meterme, ~RotmetX perdón dude, generalizé muy feo, pero mira esta parte -"Como Se Nota Que No Sabes Nada De AT :X" como tal no es un insulto, pero es una forma un tanto agresiva, e sdecir, a lo mejor ni si quiera es un fan de AT y solo anda turisteando en la galería de alguien, e igual lo que él dijo si se ve medio atacante hacia tí, pero veelo como una confusión, una vez alguien por internet se metio a una discusión que tenía en youtube y me dijo quien se enoja pierde, y es cierto, mejor dime, has leído un buen fanfic de Simon y Marcy útimamente? :)
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Marceline124 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
ok, ok, ya estoy Harta! listo, se acabo el problema?, ya todos dieron su opinion!, mejorme callo la proxima vez!!!
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BishieDream Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Cool
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
Cool
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Shadow-warrior85 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012
what happened?
i can't read the description section
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NyanNoMurder Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
rough translation:
So, this happen to get onto my mind after I saw the Adveture Time chapter "Finn the human" and "Jake the dog".

What if Finn have passed through the same that Simon Petrikov? Will he lose the Fire Princess just lika Simon lost Betty? Will Jake be with him? Will Finn forget Jake like the Ice King forgt Marceline?

The rest are some notes about wanting to make a comic instead of the picture, and not having enough time to do it.
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maxvision92 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In that case, Finn never even had Flame Princess in that world, and Jake was just a normal dog who'd probably be dead by the time Finn's that old.
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NyanNoMurder Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
who knows XD actually, I'm not fond on Adventure Time and have never see the series. I was just translating the author comment's.

And at this moment, the author has started with the comic o3o so you can read the story if search on her gallery.
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Shadow-warrior85 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
thanks
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:iconnyannomurder:
NyanNoMurder Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No problem n.n
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Shadow-warrior85 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
:)
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