Solo me pasa a mi y al coyote...

I don't usually review stuff I cannot for the life of me read, but the way you've drawn everything makes it clear on the harsh reality of progress, that being, you can be extremely close to your target, It can eventually all go to hell out of some form of carelessness (in the case of the comic, not tightening your shoe). Your style is always pleasing to look at, sort of Adventure Time mixed with anime-esque designs and simple drawings.
There are only a few things to say that could make it better. While Everything here is good, I felt this was a little underwhelming. Don't get me wrong the comic is good, but I wish there was more to bring in my attention. Such things would be color, detail, shadows, etc. This kind of joke has been done a lot in comics is all. But with that being said it is done well.

Keep up the good work!