Black Hole

Before I go into detail, I'd like to firstly say what a beautiful piece of artwork you have here! It drew my attention from all the others on the critique page. Also, I'd like to say I'm in no way a professional, I'm just trying to help out another artist. ^-^

Vision: I am assuming this is talking about colors and movement of the picture. Like I said before, very eye catching. The colors you used were perfect contrast to the character in the foreground. As for movement, my eye is instantly drawn to the center of the picture because of the warping lines. It's great that the picture draws your attention like that.

Originality: Originality isn't too bad. It is a common idea that you based this on "Heart like a black hole" But the way you introduced it is very original! I haven't seen art like this before. c:

Technique: I love the simple and thick lines that you used. It makes the picture look very neat! I like the way you did the warped lines like that of a black hole sucking something inwards. However, if there was anything I'd change it might be to add a little more detail overall.

Impact: This did impact me, because the character's face is so sincere and sad at the same time. It makes me think deeper, "What is the artist trying to say?" Are among the thoughts I had.

But in conclusion, great anatomy, lines are very clean but it could use a bit more detail.